Kinda feels like babby's first dubstep
don't get me wrong, ABSOLUTELY STELLAR idea, but it feels like a lot (too much) is going on in this song. the three key elements in dub you want to pay attention to would be the kick, snare and hi-hat (the wobble aside) and it may have just been the mixing, but it just didnt seem to connect too much it felt kinda crowded vs feeling likew a dub song where it's about the feel of the kick snare and hats. that and well, PLEASE don't EVER use FL
studio samples ever again, lol. they're just BAD.
all in all though, great tune, Looking forward to seeing you improve!
-Tre
PS, def not bad for electronica, i think just labeling it dub may have been a bad move, haha ;)